How its looking all together so far...

Above is the sequence for the 11 second club so far with the end bit added in. After the crit today Im feeling quite confident in the movement itself and that the timing is working alright, however I can now see that it needs a lot more anticipation and overlap to really exaggerate the movements and the size of the character to make it look more realistic. For example the main things I need to work on are antcipation of the arm movements, anticipation when the character sits and moves on the sofa and to take out on the the laying positions on the sofa because it isn't necessary and will give me a little more time to focus on getting the anticipation and overlap into the other movements without everything being really rushed.
so..lots of small changes and neatening to be getting on with.