After speaking with tutors and working through the script a little more, I have made some changes to the story and edited parts of the animatic, hopefully to make it work a little better and making it clearer visually. I have made more of a link between the characters towards the end, so that it works from fast snippets and becomes more relative towards the end where hopefully the audience will feel more towards the tree and characters. I think this is definitely working better, however I still think a little more consideration is needed with the shots and angles when it comes to creating the final images.
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